The
synopsis is the most important part of your submission package and, as such, it
has to be developed and polished with the same attention you devoted to the
novel itself. Along with the cover letter, the synopsis is what sells the
editor on the manuscript. If they don't see anything they like in the synopsis,
they won't even glance at your chapter samples.
The
synopsis is your sales pitch. Think of it as the jacket blurb for your novel
(the synopsis is often used in writing this, and by the publisher's art and
advertising departments, if the novel is purchased), and write it as though
you're trying to entice a casual bookstore browser to buy the novel and read
it.
One Step at a Time
Rather
than being daunted by the enormity of such a task, break it down. Do it step by
step.
The
first step, of course, is realising that you're going to have to write a
synopsis -- if you intend to market your novel, that is. The best time to
realise this is just before you sit down with your manuscript for the final
reading preparatory to declaring the thing completed.
Sit
down to that final reading with a pen and paper beside you. As you finish
reading each chapter, write down a one- or two-paragraph summary of what
happened where, and to which character, in that chapter.
Notice
any themes running through your chapters as you're reading? Symbolism you
didn't realise you'd woven through the story while you were slogging away at
the computer for all those months? Take note of themes, too. You may just
discover your one-line story summary that agents and editors like so much, if
you didn't know what it was before.
What
you will have when you are done is a chapter-by-chapter novel outline, what might
be called the author's outline. Don't throw this away when you've done your
synopsis, either. You may know the story intimately now, but you do
forget details over time. You may decide to revise the novel in the future, and
this outline will help you. Reading an outline is much easier than leafing
through or rereading an entire novel.
What
you are doing, basically, is distilling the story down into smaller and more
manageable packages, step by step. So, you pinpoint the most important
plot points in that outline, and you put them into a synopsis.
We're
talking about only those events and motivations that moved the story forward in
a major way. We're talking about only the most important characters, the ones
your reader will ultimately care about, not the bit players. Right now, we are
striving for bare-bones.
Now
I want you to envision one or two things while you rework that synopsis:
1.
Imagine that you're writing a jacket blurb for the
novel, one that will pique the casual browser's curiosity and make him or her
want to buy the book to see what happens. Read a few jacket blurbs, to get a
feel for how it's done.
2.
You've just seen a terrific movie. You're describing
it to your friend. You're not saying, "The good guy chased the bad guy and
shot him and that was the end." That doesn't sound very enthusiastic, that
sounds like your synopsis as it stands right now! No, you say things like,
"The good guy is wounded, but he knows if he doesn't stop the evil Dr. Death,
the whole world is in danger, so he staggers after Dr. Death,
falls, somehow gets to his feet again, and at last zaps him with the Good Guy
Death-ray to save the world."
When you're done, a synopsis should be filled with
enthusiastic. It should be enticing. A description that makes the reader want
to pick up the manuscript and find out how this happens!
How
can you make your synopsis unique, exciting? Start with the main character and
his or her crisis. Include snippets of dialogue or quote briefly from the novel
itself. Don't neglect to reveal the character's emotions and motivations, those
points that explain why a character does something, but keep it brief.
If the setting is exotic, inject a taste of it into the synopsis with a brief
paragraph. This includes any background information that is absolutely
necessary for the reader to understand the story. Build excitement as you near
the conclusion of the story summary by using shorter sentences and paragraphs.
The synopsis is a sample of your writing; it is a taste of what reading the
actual novel will be like, so give it your all.
Don't
forget that one- or two-sentence story line, or the theme of the story that you
discovered. It should go in your synopsis, or in your cover letter. Editors and
agents like having this distillation; not only will it pique their interest,
but it's something they can use when presenting the novel to the buying board.
It's also something you can use, the next time someone politely asks
you, "What's your novel about?"
SYNOPSIS
LENGTH
Most
editors and agents, busy people that they are, prefer short synopses -- two to
ten pages. The busier ones like five pages at most. I personally consider two
pages ideal, and have distilled synopses down to a single tight page. If you've
written a thoroughly intriguing synopsis, don't worry if it's ten or more pages
long -- but it had better be gripping.
Edit,
edit, edit, if you have to! Always keeping in mind that the synopsis must
remain interesting and supply the necessary information. Don't know what to
cut? Lose the adjectives and adverbs; keep the motivation and
"flavor" of the story.
You
have to tell the entire story in your synopsis. Don't send the first three
chapters and then start the synopsis at chapter four. Don't leave out the
ending, hoping to entice the editor or agent to request the full manuscript in
order to find out what happens. What they will do is decide you're an amateur.
No
matter what tense your novel was written in, the synopsis is always written in present tense (Jerry goes to the bullfight as opposed to Jerry went to the bullfight.)
Format:
to be on the safe side, double-space; it's easier to read. In terms of layout,
format your synopsis much as you did your novel.
The
first time you use a character's name in the synopsis, type it in CAPITAL
letters. Do this only the first time. Avoid confusion by referring to a
character the same way throughout (not "Dr. Evans"
the first time, "Jerry" the
next, and "the doctor" another time). It's also advisable to identify
which character(s) is the point of view character by typing "(POV)"
after the first instance of the character's name.
Yes,
writing a good synopsis is a lot of work, but think of it this way: not only
are you creating a vital marketing tool, but you're honing your writing skills
at the same time.
